tailieunhanh - The official guide to the new toefl ibt part 28

Tham khảo tài liệu 'the official guide to the new toefl ibt part 28', ngoại ngữ, toefl - ielts - toeic phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | On the contrary sometimes it is better to tell a lie to others such as telling a lie to a patient. As we know the sick become worse when a cancer patient know his illness. A good way to protect their life is to tell a lie. So that many doctors will not tell the truth to a dying patient. To sum up people should tell the truth to maintain their relationship with other people although sometimes people have to tell a lie. People can get trust when they are honest to others. Rater s Comments This essay is quite long but even though it uses several examples each idea is only partly developed and the connections among ideas are weak or contradictory. For instance in paragraph 2 the first sentence says honest make the trust stronger. The next two sentences present a contrast if people tell a lie to others he will not be trusted then when he tell a truth others will believe that he tells a lie. Then the last sentence in the paragraph says For example a person who is honest to others can get real help and get trust of others. But that is not an example of the previous sentence and only confuses the reader. This last sentence does not advance the progression of ideas much beyond the first sentence and certainly is not an example of the point made by the second and third sentences. Thus connections throughout this paragraph are tenuous. Paragraph 3 begins by saying that telling a lie makes things worse at work and at home but it doesn t follow through at all on the latter. The On the contrary paragraph comes as a surprise to the reader since paragraph 1 said that the writer was going to give two reasons why telling the truth was the most important consideration in human relationships. Because of all these weaknesses this essay earns a score of 2. Score 1 Essay Nowadays many people think that the people who always telling the true is the most inportant consideration in any relationship between human but another think that is necessary to tell some lies. It is seldom to reach .