tailieunhanh - Writting good or well 5

Tham khảo tài liệu 'writting good or well 5', ngoại ngữ, anh ngữ phổ thông phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | Chapter 15 Going on Location Placing Descriptions Correctly s B U The sentence begins with a verb form To form the Greeting Turtle Posture so the subject of the sentence must be the person who is supposed to do this ridiculous exercise. In the corrected sentence an understood you fills that need. The laundry description belongs to mat not to armpits though I do think fluffy armpits are nice. In the original sentence the subject of bending is implied not stated so by default the other subject in the sentence the left ankle takes that role. But the left ankle can t bend the right knee so the logic is flawed. Changing the second half of the sentence to relax the left ankle makes the subject you understood and you works as the understood subject you want for the first half of the sentence. Another possible solution Change the first half of the sentence to While you are bending. X The description almost applies to minute not to bending. Y In the original sentence now is equidistant from throw and extending creating a vague statement. Moving the description clarifies the meaning. Once you move now add a comma between back and extending to help the reader separate these two actions. z The description only applies to the number of times one should breathe not to the number of actions one should be doing. Z The introductory verb form must be an action done by the subject and the nose can t tuck the chin. The understood subject you can tuck the chin. 1 The color description belongs to sky not to yoga posture. Another more concise correction is to delete that is blue and simply say blue sky. 204 Part IV All You Need to Know about Descriptions and Comparisons Chapter 16 For Better or Worse Forming Comparisons Jn This Chapter Creating the comparative and superlative forms of adjectives and adverbs Dealing with irregular comparisons Identifying absolutes that may not be compared oes Nellie have a bigger ice cream cone Whose cold is worse Do you think Tom Cruise is the most .