tailieunhanh - TOEFL WRITING TOPICS AND MODEL ESSAYS - PART 5

Mặc dù các sinh viên ở lại với bạn học của mình tất cả các thời gian trong trường học, cha mẹ là một ảnh hưởng quan trọng vào thành công của một đứa trẻ. Tôi không đồng ý với tuyên bố rằng các bạn cùng lớp là một ảnh hưởng quan trọng vào thành công của một đứa trẻ ở trường | TWE Essays 117 292 From the above discussed I agree that classmates will influence a child more in his school success because they have more time together they understand him better than his parents and they have so much common interest together. Essay ID 151 Topic 66 Although students stay with their classmates all time in school parents are a more important influence on a child s success. I disagree with the statement that classmates are a more important influence on a child s success in school because of the reasons as follows. First of all parents are the people who understand their own children best. They know the children s good sides and bad habits. They can correct the children s bad idea and make them give rid of the bad habits. So children can found a good base to get success in school. But classmates can not do these work. The other reason is that parents have experiences on a lot of matters. If children have problems parents can give them their experiences to help them solve problems. If parents have no similar experiences they still can give their children some advice and make them avoid the wrong directions. Classmates can also give children some help but they do not have more experiences than parents. So their influence is less than that of parents. Parents also have other important influence on their children s success in school. Parents may analyze something in different ways and have different opinions from children. Classmates also can have different opinions on one thing but they are at the same conditions with each other their opinions may be similar or narrow. Children can learn more comprehensive knowledge about on thing from their parents. So based on the above discussion I think it is clear that parents are a more important influence than classmates on a child s success in school. Essay ID 268. This is a 5 point essay Topic 66 According to my experience I fully agree the view that classmates are a more important influence than parents on a