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Bài viết của cadpig17 Gia đình tôi là bình thường với bốn thành viên: cha mẹ tôi, em trai tôi và tôi. Chúng ta sống trong một căn nhà nhỏ ở Hà Nội. Cha tôi là một kỹ sư cơ khí. | Bài viết của cadpig17 My family is a normal one with four members my parents my younger brother and me. We live in a small house in Hanoi. My father is a mechanical engineer. He s tough but he loves us. Some times he was unfair and made my mother angry. Honestly I don t like my father very much. I love my mother. She s gentle and kind. She always solves every trouble in my family without argueing. Particularly she s so well at cooking that I wonder how I can learn that from her. The third member is my little brother. He s twelve years old. He likes only Pokemon games. And the last one is me. I m an undergraduate in NEU. My dream is getting a good job and earn a lot of money. My family is my life although sometimes I disagree with my father and argue him. And I know we love each others. Bài sửa của metooyou My family is a normal one with four members my parents my younger brother and me. We live in a small house in Hanoi. My father is a mechanical engineer. He s tough but he loves us. Some times Sometimes he was unfair and made my mother angry. Honestly I don t like my father very much. I love my mother. She s gentle and kind. She always solves every trouble in my family without argueing arguing. Particularly she s so well good at cooking that I wonder how I can learn that from her. The third member is my little brother. He s twelve years old. He likes only Pokemon games. And the last one is me. I m an undergraduate in NEU. My dream is getting a good job and earn a lot of money. My family is my life although sometimes I disagree with my father and argue him. And I know we love each others. - Câu này Sometimes he was unfair and made my mother angry đúng nhưng nên sửa lại là Sometimes he is unfair and make my mother angry. Câu này nên để ở thì hiện tại vì miêu tả sự thật hành động vẫn diễn ra thường xuyên. - Nên tránh viết tắt trong văn viết nên viết He is tough không nên He s tough - good at something giỏi về cái gì đó Ex He is good at math. - to be well at thời .