tailieunhanh - SAT writing essentials part 9

SAT là một trong những kỳ thi chuẩn hóa cho việc đăng ký vào một số đại học tại Hoa Kỳ. Kỳ thi SAT được quản lý bởi tổ chức phi lợi nhuận College Board của Hoa Kỳ, và được phát triển bởi tổ chức ETS - Educational Testing Service (tổ chức giáo dục chuyên về dịch vụ thi cử) Hiện tại, kỳ thi SAT kéo dài trong vòng 3 giờ 45 phút. Phí dành cho mỗi đợt thi là 71 $ cho học sinh quốc tế và 45$ cho học sinh Hoa Kỳ. Sau khi kỳ thi SAT được giới. | PRACTICE TEST 2 Another important thing money can do is enable us to live in a healthy environment. Many of the world s poorest people live in dirty dangerous places unsanitary slums crawling with diseases and health hazards of all sorts. In a particularly poor area of the Bronx for example children had an abnormally high rate of asthma because of a medical waste treatment plant that was poisoning their air. Money can also help us be healthy by enabling us to afford proper heating and cooling of our homes. This includes being able to afford a warm winter coat and the opportunity to cool off at a pool or in the ocean. On a more basic level it means being able to afford heat in the winter and air conditioning in the summer. During heat waves victims of heat stroke are often those who are too poor to afford air conditioning in their apartments. In extreme cold the same is true people who freeze to death or become gravely ill because of the cold are often those who are unable to afford high heating bills. Having money may not make people happy but it goes a long way to keeping them healthy. And as the saying goes if you don t have your health you don t have anything. This is a 6 essay. Here are the elements that make it strong dramatic hook five-paragraph structure body paragraphs each contain a main idea in a topic sentence position is supported with evidence and details ideas are well developed very few grammatical spelling and mechanics errors strong conclusion Benjamin Franklin once said that Money never made a man happy yet nor will it. There is nothing in its nature to produce happiness. I do not agree with this statement. Because money can buy access to good healthcare. In my opinion good healthcare is essential to happiness. Therefore money can make you happy by keeping you healthy. Money in the first place buys good doctors. With money you can afford all kinds of things like tests that check for diseases and special treatments if you find something wrong. If .