tailieunhanh - Wiley the official guide for GMAT Episode 2 Part 9

Tham khảo tài liệu 'wiley the official guide for gmat episode 2 part 9', ngoại ngữ, ngữ pháp tiếng anh phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | Sentence Correction Answer Explanations A that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar Syria have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but B that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar Syria yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also C having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar Syria have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but D cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar Syria yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also E cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar Syria have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but Rhetorical construction Agreement Grammatical construction This sentence explaining interconnections among a number of events needs to be streamlined as much as possible in order to become understandable. To this end unnecessary words and structures should be eliminated. Prominent among these are the relative clauses beginning with that. Additionally the subject of this sentence is the plural trenches which requires a plural verb. A That were cut . and that were arising . are unnecessarily wordy and create an unnecessarily complicated and confusing sentence structure. B In addition to the unnecessarily wordy relative clauses the singular verb yields does not agree with the plural subject trenches. C Having been cut. is unnecessarily wordy arising simultaneously must be followed by the preposition with in order to make sense. D The singular verb yields does not agree with the plural subject trenches also adds no meaning to the