tailieunhanh - Barron's writing for the toefl ibt part 23

They must get used to thinking about and describing reasons and advantages or disadvantages. In small groups, students can brainstorm and discuss their ideas on the writing topics presented throughout the book and in the Appendix. Students can then practice writing thesis statements and developing concept maps on ihc same subjects. | 156 Writing for the TOEFL iBT Introduction to Topic 6 VERSION A I think there are changes necessary in my hometown. It is always the same. There has to be something different. VERSION B If I could change one thing about my hometown I think it would be the fact that there s no sense of community here. People don t feel connected they don t look out for each other and they don t get to know their neighbors. COMMENT Version A starts with the writers opinion but doesn t say what changes arc necessary. We need some guidance. Version B narrows in on the topic and talks about the sense of community. The writer says that People don t feel connected they don t look out for each other and they don t get to know their neighbors. From this introduction I will expect to see a paragraph on each of these reasons. Introduction to Topic 13 VERSION A I believe that some people like to eat at food stands and some like to eat in restaurants. There are different reasons for this. VERSION B Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs outside the house don t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall though I think it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home. COMMENT in Version A the writer does not share what these reasons are. There are no general statements. In Version B the writer tells us that the choice depends on a person s lifestyle. The writer will probably give us more details about the reasons of convenience costs and health. Writing Skills Independent Task 157 PRACTICE 7 Read the following introductions and tell us what the writer believes and the focus of each paragraph. You might not have three paragraphs for all introductions. 1. Introduction to Topic 111 We all need to have friends and I think the more friends we have the better. Friendship helps us learn how to trust others it helps us know what to .

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