tailieunhanh - Barron's writing for the toefl ibt part 13

Two readers will read each essay and will give a score of 0-5- Neither reader will know the score the other reader gives. If the scores are more than one point apart, a third person will read your essay. Your score will then be con¬vened to a scaled score of 0-30. | 84 Writing for the TOEFL iBT Summary 3 READING NOTES Main idea A particular smoking prevention campaign aimed at young people has been successful. Supporting details 1 Many teens participated in antismoking events and many saw amismoking ads. 2 Teens who saw the ads are less likely to start smoking. 3 t he public health department will continue and expand the campaign. LECTURE NOTES Main idea The initial results of public health campaigns can be misleading. Supporting details I Surveys taken near the end of an antismoking campaign showed 40 unlikely to try smoking. 2 Surveys taken three months later showed 58 very likely to try smoking THESIS STATEMENT The author tells us about a particular smoking prevention campaign aimed at young people that has been successful. In contrast the speaker warns us that initial results of public health campaigns can be misleading. PARAPHRASED SENTENCES Reading - The program included advertising no smoking policies and antismoking events. - Many teens participated in the events and many more saw the ads. The public health department will continue with this successful campaign to improve public health among young people in the state. Lecture Surveys made at the end of a recent antismoking campaign showed that 50 knew about the campaign and 40 would probably not smoke. - Three months later the numbers had changed. - Many more said they would probably smoke and many fewer said they knew about the campaign. based on Reading 3 and Lecture 3 page 50 Writing Skills Integrated Task 85 86 Writing for the TOEFL BT Summary 4 READING NOTES Main idea A good mood makes shoppers buy more. Supporting details 1 Mood can be affected by weather personal life and store environment. 2 Retailers create a store environment to have a positive impact on mood and therefore on sales. LECTURE NOTES Main idea Studies show that mood can make consumers spend more time shopping. Supporting details 1 When listening to slow music restaurant patrons remained longer .