tailieunhanh - Action plan for IELTS part 6

Tham khảo tài liệu 'action plan for ielts part 6', ngoại ngữ, toefl - ielts - toeic phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | Task 2 Look at this paragraph from a student s essay. The sentences are all simple so the examiner cannot give a high mark for grammar even though the meaning is clear. Nearly all countries have traffic problems. They can be hard to solve. Local people can reduce some of the problems. They can choose to walk rather than drive. But this is often not a popular option. So the number of vehicles on the roads rises. However sometimes there are poor road or traffic conditions. There is not much the public can do about this. Governments musttake steps to reduce congestion. This means imposing laws. Here is the same paragraph re-written with a wider range of sentence types. This will get a better mark. Nearly all countries have traffic problems which can be hard to solve. Local people can reduce some of the problems by choosing to walk ratherthan drive butthisis often nota popular option. So the number of vehicles on the roads rises. If there are poor roads or traffic conditions however there is not much the public can do. Either way governments clearly need to take steps to reduce congestion and this may mean imposing Laws. How can I improve my accuracy As well as checking for grammar mistakes you should also make sure your punctuation is accurate. 1 Find the punctuation errors in this paragraph there is one on each line . commas needed round unlike bicycles a. b. c. d. e. f. g. Itis a well-known fact that cars and buses unlike bicycles use Lots of petroland create a great deal of pollution surely something can be done about this. If we cannot get people to walk or share vehicles we should put more pressure on scientist s to build solar powered engines. Although it may take some time to achieve this it would be worth it There are other alternatives too. For example if we all started driving electric cars the world would be a much cleaner place ACTION PLAN Analyse the task to see how many parts you have to write about. Decide on your position and your main ideas. Introduce