tailieunhanh - Speaking and Writing Strategies for the TOEFL iBT part 5

Before you take the TOEFL test, find out the TOEFL requirements of the school to which you are applying- Some . colleges and universities do not require a TOEFL score. | Independent Essay - 29 Step 5 Revise your first draft using your revision checklist. Personally I agree. I think that we need zoos. For example when I was 12 my teacher took us to the zoo in Berlin. I had never seen wild animals before. I had just read about them in books and seen them on the TV. But seeing them in real life was amazing especially the lions. On TV they looked so small but seeing them live they were really big. By going to the zoo I definitely saw things in a whole new light. Now I have a family and we always go to the zoo every summer. My wife makes a picnic and we spend all day there. My kids love taking pictures and learning all about the animals especially the gorillas. Being outside is good for my children. Best of all they can leave the internet and the TV at home. Also zoos look after endangered animals like pandas. I saw two in the Washington DC zoo last year and they had a baby. If there were no zoos the pandas would disappear because we are taking their land away. However in a zoo the pandas are safe. It is not perfect but without zoos there might not be any pandas left. For those reasons I think that we need zoos. Step 6 Submit your essay. After you have revised your essay submit it. Warning Make sure you have made all the necessary revisions before you submit your essay. Once you submit it you cannot get it back. 30 - Independent Essay Mapped out you can see how G 3TiC C gives the writing raters what they are trained to look for an independent essay that demonstrates OPDUL C. Note Transitions T are in bold supporting illustrations i in italics the opinion G and the conclusions C underlined. general Personally I agree. I think that we need zoos. TiC specific For example when I was 12 my teacher took us to the zoo in Berlin. I had never seen wild animals before. I had just read about them in books and seen them on the TV. But seeing them in real life was amazing especially the lions. On TV they looked so small but seeing them live they .