tailieunhanh - How to prepare for the toefl essay 2nd edition part 15

Khi bạn đang học cách viết, bạn phải, đồng thời, tìm hiểu để viết lại. Bạn phải làm cho nó một thói quen để viết lại các bài tiểu luận bạn viết trong cuốn sách này. Hãy thử để kết hợp bạn bè của bạn 'sug-gestions thành bài luận sửa đổi của bạn càng nhiều bạn viết, thì tốt hơn bạn sẽ viết. | REVI SIN G TH E ES SAY 145 older ones. A student who has friends ofdifferent races at school mayfind that his parents have narrower views. A student who loves computers may find that herparents don t understand or value the digital revolution. Parents are important teachers in our lives hut they arent always the best teachers fortunately we have many teachers in our lives. Our parents teach us our teachers teach us and we learn from our peers. Books and newspapers also teach us. All of them are valuable Essay Organization Th eme Parents a ren t a I ways th e best tea chers. Point 1 They may be close emotionally. Examples Trip to a big city Camping. Point 2 They may expect similar interests. Examples Science vs. art Sports vs. reading Point3 Values change Examples Friends of different races Computers Write the error its location sentence paragraph and its correction. ERROR LOCATION CORRECTION CONTENT i. l f ca rv to wft ty anfvohPamt tfdfa rrt nfo Mnfa rvCh 5 t uühM wv Uwbv dytjffp rvd Iwttp fv wfAteP the ty apvp tto GRAMMAR 146 HOW TO PREPARE FOR THE TOEFL ESSAY PUNCTUATION 6. 7. 8 SPELLING 9. Practice 11 Proof the following essay. Use the Proofing Checklist as a guide. Use the concept map to help you identify the content. The type and number of errors axe identified. REVISING THE ESSAY 147 Proofing Checklist J CONTENT 1 Is there a thesis statement or introduction Is there a topic sentence for each paragraph 1 Are there supporting details for each topic statement Is there a conclusion CLARITY 1 Are there run-on sentences or sentence fragments 1 Are there misplaced modifiers or dangling modifiers 1 Are the structures parallel J Are there transition words J Are the sentences and paragraphs cohesive PUNCTUATION AND SPELLING 5 Are the paragraphs indented 1 Are there punctuation marks such as periods at the end of each sentence 1 Do all sentences begin with capital letters 1 Are all the words spelled correctly Topic Is it better for children to participate in team .