tailieunhanh - How to prepare for the toefl essay 2nd edition part 3

Trong ba đoạn của cơ thể, bạn nên có một khoản cho mỗi câu chủ đề. . Bạn sẽ không được ghi trên bạn có bao nhiêu đoạn văn sẽ được ghi vào như thế nào bạn có địa chỉ chủ đề của bạn. | INTRODUCTION 17 Proofing Checklist J CONTENT The thesis of this essay is very clear and easy to locate at the end of the introduction. This essay is generally well writer carefully compares and contrasts the level of influence one receives from one s parents with the influence one receives from one s writer is able to develop his her is a conclusion that restates the thesis. J CLARITY The author displays facility in the use of language but there are some repeated errors in usage and grammar that slow the reader down. S he seems to be comfortable with expressing ideas in English. Word choice is not always ideal but ideas are understandable. Friends advice good things about life but not like family. Friends advise good things about life but not like family. Therefore family puts their substantial impact on heir children . Therefore families have a substantial impact on their children. In the US most young adults are usually influence by their friends. In the US most young adults are usually influenced by their friends. J PUNCTUATION There are no punctuation errors. J SPELLING There is only one spelling error. Therefore family puts their substantial impact on heir children. Therefore family puts their substantial impact on their children. Topic 136 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Playing Is Fun if We Win Some would like to play the game such as basketball tennis swimming and riding bike for exercises and fun. But some they play for their acbeivement. I agree that playing game is fun when we win. As a matter of fact when I was in High school I like to play basketball as my hobby. I was very excited when I won the game. All high schools in Cambodia they required students to choose one kind of game such as volleyball soccer basketball tennis and swimming. By that time 1 took basketball as my favorite hobby. My .