tailieunhanh - 50 harvard essays part 2

Các yếu tố là vô hạn, nhưng, nếu được yêu cầu để cô lập họ, tôi có thể thấy rối xung quanh y học và viết. Các trick sẽ được tích hợp chúng thành một toàn thể, và sau đó có lẽ tôi có thể làm những bức ảnh. Aahh, là nó đã có, không có? Em không thấy nó? Tôi gọi Daedalus trong tôi, mọi thứ đã đi vào làm cho tôi, hy vọng nó sẽ được giải phóng của tôi. | Essays are for reference only. Do NOT copy or imitate anything as a scholar as a contributor to my community and as a member of a family. But neither my family nor my extended family nor my teachers could comprise my entire identity. Rather I will remain like the first page of a book with the first line incomplete - a story waiting to be told. ANALYSIS Levey s essay is very much a self-exploration of being an intellect. Her idea of emphasizing her love of learning is solid and she clearly has a sophisticated grasp of prose but the overall package might have done better with a little more understated elegance. The introduction is intriguing with the use of an unobvious historical fact about customs in the Middle Ages. She successfully introduces herself and her perception of her role in the world. The first two paragraphs are an easy read except that the use of too many polysyllabic adjectives can become a little bit distracting. Personal essays that are show me rather than tell me tend to be more convincing. What mental gymnastics has she experienced before W here has she really pushed for self-growth The section which describes college as the next stop on my journey for self-enlightenment and the crescendo of my intellectual revolution catalyzed by professors who can awaken my mind ignite my senses and alter my perception of the world is a little bit over the top. You don t have to tell the reader that college is the next step in intellectual growth the reader should be able ReiereiWe iiiye Plagiarism is severely punished Myung Myung --Myung H. Joh The hot-blooded Spaniard seems to be revealed in the passion and urgency of his doubled exclamation points. ----Pico Lyer In Praise of the Humble Comma Are you a member of the Kung Tribe is a commonly asked question when people see my signature which has an exclamation point at the end of it. No I am not a member of any tribe nor am I putting the mark at the end of my name to be cute. It is not simply a hiccup in my .